Comments on: Chapter Eight – “Band of Sisters” http://thechangers.wordpress.com/2008/06/20/chapter-eight-band-of-sisters/ People change the world with their actions everyday, some more than others. One such person will change the world in a way that everything we know about it will be called into question. The only way to save the world was to remove this person from it, even if it meant sending hundreds into the unknown. Sun, 10 May 2009 23:57:03 +0000 http://wordpress.com/ hourly 1 By: Joe aka Nephlite http://thechangers.wordpress.com/2008/06/20/chapter-eight-band-of-sisters/#comment-98 Joe aka Nephlite Mon, 03 Nov 2008 07:59:28 +0000 http://thechangers.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-98 Lovely illustraton on exactly why everyone both loves and hates Frost, lol. Lovely illustraton on exactly why everyone both loves and hates Frost, lol.

]]> By: Frost http://thechangers.wordpress.com/2008/06/20/chapter-eight-band-of-sisters/#comment-53 Frost Sun, 22 Jun 2008 22:43:06 +0000 http://thechangers.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-53 Well, really, it was just Elise ASSUMING that the reference was to Apocalypse Now. Given that they were female warriors flying to collect a 'dead' warrior from the battlefield, either reference could well be appropriate. In all, a most enjoyable chapter. A nice balance between irreverent pop-culture reference and heady action, with a touch of intrigue tossed in for good measure. I look forward to seeing what comes next. Well, really, it was just Elise ASSUMING that the reference was to Apocalypse Now. Given that they were female warriors flying to collect a ‘dead’ warrior from the battlefield, either reference could well be appropriate.

In all, a most enjoyable chapter. A nice balance between irreverent pop-culture reference and heady action, with a touch of intrigue tossed in for good measure. I look forward to seeing what comes next.

]]> By: Celtic Minstrel http://thechangers.wordpress.com/2008/06/20/chapter-eight-band-of-sisters/#comment-50 Celtic Minstrel Sat, 21 Jun 2008 02:24:07 +0000 http://thechangers.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-50 I thought you misspelled "ambience", but Wiktionary claims both spellings are correct, so I guess that's okay! I think there's an error in the last section – in "the two men could not see what lied beneath the placid surface", it should be "lay" rather than "lied". "Lied" is the past of "lie", as in not telling the truth. And I have to say that [i]Flight of the Valkyries[/i] makes me think more of Wagner's Ring Cycle of operas than [i]Apocalypse Now[/i] (whatever that is). Not that I've ever seen any of them... It's pretty interesting, especially the fact that the pixies actually seem to know Anne. I also like that the agents have already been discovered by [i]someone[/i]. I thought you misspelled “ambience”, but Wiktionary claims both spellings are correct, so I guess that’s okay!

I think there’s an error in the last section – in “the two men could not see what lied beneath the placid surface”, it should be “lay” rather than “lied”. “Lied” is the past of “lie”, as in not telling the truth.

And I have to say that [i]Flight of the Valkyries[/i] makes me think more of Wagner’s Ring Cycle of operas than [i]Apocalypse Now[/i] (whatever that is). Not that I’ve ever seen any of them…

It’s pretty interesting, especially the fact that the pixies actually seem to know Anne. I also like that the agents have already been discovered by [i]someone[/i].

]]> By: Simsandwich http://thechangers.wordpress.com/2008/06/20/chapter-eight-band-of-sisters/#comment-49 Simsandwich Sat, 21 Jun 2008 02:02:49 +0000 http://thechangers.wordpress.com/?p=31#comment-49 There's a bit of juggling of the characters to do, but I'm enjoying the different, interconnecting stories. ;) There’s a bit of juggling of the characters to do, but I’m enjoying the different, interconnecting stories. ;)

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